What if we
danced forever?
I'll lead,
you follow.
What if we stayed up
all night?
Taking about movies
and jello.
Would you be
happy?
The tears on your face
say "no."
Have you laughed
this week?
Looks like it hurts
to swallow.
Is this a week
to remember?
Goes by fast
yet so slow.
But what if we
kissed?
Would that break your rule?
I want us to grow.
When will things get
rocky?
Our love is something
I want to flow.
What if you
were scared?
I would hold you
and never let go.
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A compilation of poetry, musings, and prose.
Image courtesy of Jacci Howard Bear http://desktoppub.about.com/
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Welcome to "Scribbles on Asphalt", an open forum for LOG'ers to express themselves creatively in various ways: poetry, prose, lyrics, or even photography... Don't hesitate to post or comment! Please spread the word to any writers out there who are interested in joining... Anyone is welcome to write. However, if you have other suggestions to expand the forum, or any other web host ideas to make blogging easier for you, let me know at charplat11@gmail.com. Thanks!
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2 comments:
I like reading rhyming poems since I write freeverse so much. My favorite lines:
"What if we
danced forever?
I'll lead,
you follow."
It seems as if this poem is about someone who is thinking about entering a relationship... but that's just my opinion. (Or someone who's already in a relationship but wants it to grow.) Is that what you're trying to convey?
But again, I do like the format. Question? Answer.
deng charmaine...you're good =)
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